At first my final palyful and periodic were as follows
THe group felt that I successfully portrayed playful and periodic and that they were distinguiahable wheteher they were together or not. They also saw continuance for both pieces and that the playful one had proximity. Personally I don't see that but whatever not my critique. THe periodic one was said to have closure. I think that's stretching but I do see that. And too they found that the playful worked because it has a nice asymmetry while the periodic had bilateral symmetry. For both they liked the frame and the balance of negatve space. I was encouraged to straighten the frame though for the playful one and make sharper edges for both. After I started over for my new final ones I decided that Ms. Kelley was right and that it might be better to change my periodic one simply because I solved the problem in a more unique way. Here is the one I changed it to accompanied with the playful complete with sharper edges.
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