Critiqued :P

The group said that they could tell that my structure was actually a pinecone :), but they said I should bend the cardboard inthe middle outward so it could have more of a flared out look which is silly because that was actually the first thing I tried and guess what I did not work. But I do see what they mean and instead of bending the cardboard outwardly in the middle, I'm going to bend the tips outwardly so it can have at least some kind of flared out look. And that was pretty much all the said about mine